Эссе на 10

Эссе на курсере оценено в 10 баллов. Если я правильно понимаю — это максимальный балл. Сам я себе поставил 4/10 (минимальный, но не нулевой)

Как формируются баллы:

RUBRIC (points will be multiplied x2)
There are two components to the score for this assignment. The first is a quantitative measure and the second is a qualitative assessment of the submission. Give a score for each component according to the rubric below. Note that the qualitative component focuses on the motivation aspects of the assignment; you do not need to evaluate the overall quality of the gamified system description. You may optionally also provide free-form feedback to the student.
The submission should be the student’s own work. If you conclude that a substantial portion has been copied without attribution from another student or an online resource, assign a score of “0” to both components.

Quantitative Measure

Did the student effectively answer both portions of the question:

0 No answer or completely irrelevant answer.
1 Either describes a gamified system or explained the relationship to motivation, but not both.
2 Describes a gamified system and explains its relationship to motivation.

Score from your peers: 2
Score from yourself: 1

Qualitative Measure

Did the student effectively address the question about motivation:

0 No answer or completely irrelevant answer.
1 Discusses motivation but does not coherently apply the concepts of intrinsic (activities desirable in and of themselves) and extrinsic (activities desirable to achieve some external factors such as rewards, status, or power) motivation.
2 Explains how the proposed system would involve intrinsic or extrinsic motivation, but does not address the context of an internal gamification system for an institution such as city government.
3 Explains how the proposed system would involve intrinsic or extrinsic motivation within the context of an internal gamification system.

Score from your peers: 3
Score from yourself: 1

What I liked was…
self → That’s my idea! =)
peer 1 → The iniziative proposed
peer 2 → Pretty good detail about the elements of a gamification system.
peer 3 → comprehensive, elaborate explanation
peer 4 → [This area was left blank by the evaluator.]
peer 5 → The use of realistic, tangible solutions (bicycle and fitness planning) and socialisation.

What could have made this submission better was…
self → Need to talk specific about intrinsic and extrinsic motivation. =(
peer 1 → The assignemnt in sometimes too generic, there are not soo much indication about how the proposed system would involve intrinsic or extrinsic motivation within the context of an internal gamification system.
peer 2 → Unclear how this will help the city’s budget and «transform city government». City bean counters would require that increased costs be offset by some kind of gains. How would this system do that is the question. Also does not appear to answer the question re the principles of motivation applied to the proposed gamification system.
peer 3 → it think its fine
peer 4 → [This area was left blank by the evaluator.]
peer 5 → Well done. Keep up the good work

Почитать само эссе можно тут: /proshyol-esse-na-kursere/